SKaitlyn

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Miami vs. Chicago vs. U.S.
11/11/09 Miami is over all the **worst with crimes( wording)**. National is low compared to Miami and Chicago. Miami has a higher average than the whole U.S. Chicago also has a higher average than the whole U.S. Although Chicago and Miami are close, Miami has more **people doing( not needed)** assault, burglary, theft and auto theft. Chicago has more **people that** **(not needed)** murder and rob. National is the lowest number for all of them. Chicago is probably a better town to live in.

Miami vs. L.A. vs. National
11/11/09 Miami is horrible! They **don't only have Chicago beat but they have Los Angeles beat too!( I get your point, but comparisons will be more effective)** Los Angeles is still ahead with National being the last. Miami has them both beat by a lot.**In what ways?** Los Angeles is lower than Chicago. **In what ways?** Miami is realy high with people that kill and rob and steal. Out of the **tree** **(sp)** different towns I would live in Los Angeles.

Miami vs. Portsmouth vs. National
11/11/09 Again Miami has **more law breakes than the others (wording)**. **National and Portsmouth are fkind of close,(no comma) on some of them. National has Portsmouth beat on most of them, (This sentence contradicts itself)** there is one they are tied on. Portsmouth has tiny numbers until you get to theft. Then they are the same there. Portsmouth has very, very, very, **little(different word)** murders, **if not nothing**. **Out of everything I have done Portsmouth is the best thing to do. Not sure what this sentence means. Kaitie, some good comparisons. Please indicate exactly what comparisons you are making. Watch wording of your sentences. 90/90**

Bottle Making
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My E.T. Conclusion
====**I think the car is both living and non living. They are living because they eat up fuel and run around. But I think they are mostly dead because without humans they wouldn't start and if they didn't start they would need gas. They wouldn't run around and be energetic without humans starting them. They constantly depend on us to steer them, other wise they would go off the road or go on the other side of the road and crash. They're almost like babies, always depending on us to tell them what to do, feed them, give them water and everything else.**====

My Apple Conclusion
====**An apple, I think is alive because in order to live it needs water and sunshine. Once someone eats it it all changes. Even if you take it off the tree it will still get ripe. If it doesn't get sunshine and water it when it's on the tree it will die. I think it has more life on the tree than anywhere else but I think it still lives, even off the tree.**====