AZoe

11/11/09 CRIME CHARTS The catigories are murder, robbery, **assult**, burglary, theft, and **A**uto theft. Also, these graphs show that smaller towns with smaller populations seem safer, especially in more serious crimes like **murdur**. Another thing I noticed was that In theft, Portsmouth and National were the same amount, **and that was the only chart that the two lined up in (better wording).** In Miami**, I think that because of all the people, there is better camoflage (Explain this**.) Also, there are more people who are tourists or are just visiting, so people can steal stuff and leave the town and nobody would know**.(Does this mean the tourists and visitors are stealing?)** For Los **Angelas**, there is not much crime(**Do you mean less?),** exept for **murdur**. I think this is because in Los Angelas, there are more drugs.**You are stating mor drugs but less crime?** Pourtsmouth is obviously the safest of the **3** towns. This is because there are not as many people. Also, many people know each other and have crime watch systems or friends who watch your house when **your** away.
 * For the Charts about crime**( better introduction),**there is no doubt in my mind** that Miami is the city with **the** more crime in most cases. However, in the **catigories** of burglary and **murdur**, Chicago suceeds Miami.


 * Zoe, your thoughts are good. Please work on wording and using the data to tell the story. You have a lot of spelling errors-90/85**

Bottle-making- 9/25 1. I think that bottles are made from amorphous solids such as plastic and glass instead of crystalline solids because the glass and plastic will get soft once heated, but the crystalline solids melt instantly, making it impossible to mold. 2. The molds need to be at a similar temperature to the glass because if the glass gets cooled while it is in the mold, the bottle will not come out right. 3. When the parison is placed in the second mold, it doesn't yet have the exact shape of a finished bottle.the parision's viscosity is high because it must be rubbery to finish it's molding process. 4.Glass is sometimes called a super cool liquid. I think this is because when the glass is very hot, it is a liquid,but when it cools,it is a solid.

Is this apple alive? i think that Ms Morris's apple is not alive.It was when it was on the tree, because a tree has roots to consume water,and the properties needed to make it into food, but the apple's only power is to transport seeds.

9/11/09 Hello,this is zoe.This is my ET conclusion. "I do not believe Herbie is living. Although cars seem to eat,sleep, communicate, and act on their own,there are reasonable explinations for all of those characteristics. For instance, what ET thought was communication was really the work of the people in the cars.ET did not see the people, because when he went to get the car, the people were not in the cars. They were asleep in their homes.