BLindsey

11-11
 * Miamis** crime rates are very high in **everything(different word)**. Its a little bit lower in murder and robbery but its still pretty high. The national rate is **way lower** **(different word)**on everything. Chicago's crime rates **by(?)** are higher in murder and robbery but not by much**.** But in **assault burglary theft** **(commas)** and auto theft its lower by a lot. The national rank is pretty close to Chicago in theft and burglary.

Overall **i** can see **that** the crime rates are very high in Miami and Chicago. I would say too high for me to live **in**. If I had to choose one or the other i would choose Chicago because its crime rates overall **i would say look** a little bit lower. **I would say** the rest of the **united states** is pretty safe but theft is a little bit high**.(Why do you think this is true?)**

Los Angeles is a different story. Its murder is pretty high but besides that everything else is okay. Theft and burglary are even lower then the national rank! Burglary is one of the lowest things on there. **Miamis** theft, assault and burglary are even less then half the size of **Miamis** ranks.

Overall **i would say** the crime rates are okay(**Where?).** I mean they could be better because the murder is pretty high and murder is probably the least thing you would want to live with but i would say the crime rates aren't bad. I **wouldnt** mind living there. But i would much rather live in NH.

Portsmouth is **way better**. All the crime rates are really low. **m**urder is **about nothing**. **Theft is a little high its about the same** as the national rankings. But that's not a bad thing because the national rankings are still really good! The burglary in **portsmouth** is about 5 times smaller then Miami. The assault is 15 times smaller then Miami and 4 times smaller then the national ranks. Which is pretty amazing. **Nice Comparisons**.

Over all **i** would say Portsmouth is a great place to live! Its crime rates are **amazing!** I live about 20 minutes away from there right now. I don't think anyone's gotten murdered in at least the past 3 years or so.**Can you check this statistic?**


 * Lindsey, some very good analysis with a lot of mistakes in grammer, and capitalization. 100/85**

9-25 1. I think bottles are are made from amorphous solids such as solid and glass because it has to be heated and if you heat crystalline solids it would just melt but when you heat up amorphous solids it gets rubbery. 2. The melting point of the mold is about the same temputare as the glass so that way the glass dosen't get cooled down. 3. I think the parison has high viscosity because the glass mold still needs to be thick but it also needs to be thin so you can get it out of the outer layer of glass. 4. I think its called the super cooled liquid because you freeze the liquid to turn it into the glass botel.

9-15 apple conclusion: I think that the apple is not living but i think it used to be living. Before someone picked it off an apple tree it was living because it used to eat food and drink water through that the tree got from its roots. It also used to need sunlight and oxygen. It also used to breath. When it was living it was growing stronger and older like everything living does. But the apple dosen't have that anymore. When someone picked the apple of the tree i would say it "died".

9-11 ET conclusion: I think that Herbie is not living because he needs someone to move him. He also dosent have a heatbeat he dosent need oxygen and he can't breath.Life forms don't have flashing red lights on them. The car needs gas like food but no living thing can actually eat gas not even plant they usually die.It needs a key and a battery to run. People can go inside of the car and the car dosent get mad and try to get them out like us and bugs if they try and fly in out mouth. The last thing is people can control the car completely and Herbie has no control. I guess i could see why ET thought he was living cuz he thought gas was food and honking was communicating but as you can see it is clearly not.