MGabrielle

 **11/11** miami vs. chicago **For** M (no cap)**urder, Chicago is more than** m**iami, not by much but ,(no comma)in muder (comma) n(cap)ational is low down (wording). Theft(comma), the n(cap)ational is the highest out of all of the graph(add an s). Robbery for n(cap)ational is the lowest out of all the graphs(on which one?). c(cap)hicago has had more murder, robbery than m(cap)iami and n(sp and cap)aional. Miami is the most for(is highest or has the most-wording) burglary, theft, auto theft and assult.

Miami vs. LA: Miami for all of the graphs is the highest.** LA is the highest its going to get of the graphs is muder.(Wording on this sentence) **for assult(sp) and burglery the national(cap) ave(write out)is the same. t(cap)he lowest** the LA is going to get (wording)**is in assult(sp). f(cap)or theft LA is the lowest and n(cap)ational is the second highest it's really close to Miami. a(cap)uto theft it's(is)like a stair case all going down it goes MIami then LA then national.**


 * Miami vs. Portsmouth : In murder, Portsmouth has** as barly anything you can barly see it**.(wording and spelling) Like on the other charts Miami is the highest out (don't need)of all of them. For Robbery the n(cap)ational is higer(sp) than Portsmouth. Portsmouth in(choice of words) robbery is the second lowest out of all the graphs. Assult(sp) p(cap)ortsmouth is the lowest** almost the same as robbery(choice of words)**. For Robbery and assult(cap and sp) for the national ave( Cap and spell out word). they (cap)are tied. Theft national(wording and cap) and Portsmouth are tied. Auto theft for Portsmouth it(don't need it) is the fourth lowest. Portsmouth for theft is the highest it is out of all the other graphs. For burglery Portsmouth is the secound highest for all the graphs.**


 * Gabby, Miami, Chicago and National need to be capitalized. Watch spelling and wording. Good comparisons. 95/85**

9/25
 * bottle making **
 * 1.**I think that a glass bottle are made out of amorphous instead of crystalline is because crystalline does not mold as well as glass bottle. and the crystalline is hard and it might hurt.

 **3.** Well you would whant the secound mold to have a high viscosity because it would be easier to mold than it to have a low viscosity and be liquidy. 
 * 2.**The reason why you would need the tempuature to be high is becasue the bottle wont mold right so if you had it cold it wouldnt mold liek you would want it to.
 * 4.** A "Super cooled liquid" is the process of lowering the tempeature of a liquid or a gas below its freezing point, without it becoming a solid.

9/15 is the apple alive?  When the apple is on the tree it is living because, the tree has to produse the apple and it grows. but when it is off the tree i dont think that it is living. the reason why is that the tree is not giving the apple carbon dioxcide.

9/11 E.T conclustion:

Do you believe Herbie is living or not?

I believe that Herbie is not living because, Herbie is a car and he does not take in oxygen and carbon dioxcide. he does not sleep, and the only way that Herbie will eat is that a person will fill up the car ​ will gas. it does not move by its self.